Comments on Never Stop Dreaming: I want you to feel me

@ Nalini, thanks for stopping by and sharing your ...

2009-12-16T21:31:59.265+09:00

@ Nalini, thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad that you liked the poem. Regarding the odiogo option, it's only good for articles but sounds funny in case of poems.

nice to read this sad love poem...the odiogo recit...

2009-12-16T21:15:24.042+09:00

nice to read this sad love poem...the odiogo recital was quite comical, I am sorry to say

Thank you all for your wonderful feedback. You all...

2009-11-05T09:39:19.213+09:00

Thank you all for your wonderful feedback. You all have brought smiles on my face by your nice words.

Manish ji, welcome to this blog! your comment came to me as a big surprise :-) I feel so happy that you liked the poem.

Dear Shahid and apprentice, welcome to 'Never Stop Dreaming'! Thank you so much for your beautiful words.

Nava Raj Sir, It's the first time that you commented to my poetry and it feels so good to have your compliment. Thanks for your words, I treasure it, and keep it as a motivation to look beyond.

Before I stop, I would like to thank you all once again. Thanks for all the encouragement.

It was a bit difficult for me to understand the po...

2009-11-03T15:15:50.115+09:00

It was a bit difficult for me to understand the poem (because I always find poems very difficult to understand in English language). But the indications are one day poet Deependra ji might overcome Power Systems Engineer- Researcher Deependra ji. Keep on!

Heart-touching! Found this one the best befitting ...

2009-10-31T00:21:01.962+09:00

Heart-touching! Found this one the best befitting word!

Nice Poem...

2009-10-30T11:44:41.717+09:00

Nice Poem...

ppl say that u have to underplay the emotions a li...

2009-10-30T03:29:52.891+09:00

ppl say that u have to underplay the emotions a little bit, leave a little more imagination, I ask why?, when emotions are so strong why underplay them, lovely
i liked the line "I wonder,
If silence has ever been this loud?"
brilliant

Dear deependra jee! very best poem. keep writing.....

2009-10-30T00:50:03.837+09:00

Dear deependra jee! very best poem. keep writing...... I always like this type of poem. many many thanks to give me grate feeling.

Amazing! This is one of the best poems I have come...

2009-10-30T00:08:16.645+09:00

Amazing! This is one of the best poems I have come across in quite some time. wonderful flow of expressions. Intense feelings. cheers, my friend! Looking for more.

Nice one Deependrajee! Very romantic!

2009-10-29T11:35:51.254+09:00

Nice one Deependrajee! Very romantic!

wow ! loved this poem...seems like written in a mo...

2009-10-29T11:01:23.908+09:00

wow ! loved this poem...seems like written in a mood...great feelings... :)

@ Shail, thanks for stopping by and leaving your c...

2009-10-29T07:06:12.415+09:00

@ Shail, thanks for stopping by and leaving your comments. after a careful revision, I decided to drop the word 'the' before 'life'. Appreciate your suggestion.

Extremly flawless expression in my own perspective...

2009-10-29T03:56:27.143+09:00

Extremly flawless expression in my own perspective , pls keep writing ... thanks !

I echo the first comment. Simply loved it. The pat...

2009-10-29T02:38:11.931+09:00

I echo the first comment. Simply loved it. The pathos gets across to the reader.
"It’s a shivering dark night
But can’t freeze my feelings for you"
Loved these lines especially! And the last few lines beginning with 'I wonder...' really conveys the pain.
In the last section i wonder if you should be using the word 'the' before 'ife'. Mind you, I am no expert, but I feel it should be "If life has ever been this illusive"

I simply loved the poem!!!!

2009-10-28T23:56:36.601+09:00

I simply loved the poem!!!!

one of your most expressive works. Powerful and pe...

2009-10-28T20:54:56.643+09:00

one of your most expressive works. Powerful and personal and more than anything, REAL. good work,

-richard